Yellow Manga Moon redraw WIP

It's taken me awhile, but I finally can share some progress with you for a new redraw I am drawing. The original is a manga illustration spread by Naoko Takeuchi for which I have always had a love/hate complex. I love Naoko Takeuchi's works for many reasons, but the anatomy of the poses and dresses in this one illustration always bothered me. So I finally set out to see if I could so boldly "improve" or at least update the art with my own style. To the left I will eventually update with Usagi, Tuxedo Mask, and MINAKO!